fuckboy (nintendo and etc) created by masterploxy
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  • karlington said:
    I'm surprised it's remained confusing and entertaining for 93 pages.

    the plot is strong in this one.

    plot? i think you mean to say the "wtf?" is strong in this one.

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  • ThoughtCrime said:
    I mean the art is good but the plot is spanish soap opera tier.

    I like to think that that's part of it's charm.
    As long as I'm enjoying the ride, the plot can do however many backflips or faceplants it wants.
    Note: I don't mean 'ride' as in the porn, I mean the overall story

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  • ThoughtCrime said:
    How has this abortion of a comic been going on for 93 pages. Idk if I should consider this artistic talent, being a hack, autism, or all of the above. But its made me laugh enough to like it. I mean the art is good but the plot is spanish soap opera tier.

    Well, at least it's a thousand times better than that other comic with a certain blue kobold and a certain green raptor.

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  • ThoughtCrime said:
    How has this abortion of a comic been going on for 93 pages. Idk if I should consider this artistic talent, being a hack, autism, or all of the above. But its made me laugh enough to like it. I mean the art is good but the plot is spanish soap opera tier.

    "Artistic talent Being a hack, autism, or all the above"

    Dude...the fuck you on about....

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  • Waba said:
    Well, at least it's a thousand times better than that other comic with a certain blue kobold and a certain green raptor.

    I likes that one,

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  • ...ok, I'm missing something here.

    Am I the only one who feels this business with the dead trainer hasn't been resolved yet despite this plot dumping the author's been giving us? It's like he can't make up his mind in whether to focus on the comedy or the drama, and that lack of consistency has been damaging this plot entirely.

    Not even the Gallade's reaction faces nor the Geodudes feel like they can save this train wreck...

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  • Retconner said:
    ...ok, I'm missing something here.

    Am I the only one who feels this business with the dead trainer hasn't been resolved yet despite this plot dumping the author's been giving us? It's like he can't make up his mind in whether to focus on the comedy or the drama, and that lack of consistency has been damaging this plot entirely.

    Not even the Gallade's reaction faces nor the Geodudes feel like they can save this train wreck...

    Comedy,drama or porn?

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  • Waba said:
    Well, at least it's a thousand times better than that other comic with a certain blue kobold and a certain green raptor.

    And a million times better than Ashschu.
    Every comic is better than Ashchu, though, so it's not much of an award.

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  • sombobombo said:
    Comedy,drama or porn?

    Mainly the comedy/drama. The porn is icing/taken for granted... even though it looks static to me, but that's an issue I'll save for later.

    It's got a case of mood whiplash that just irks me. I'd thought it was bad to have scenes that are in direct contrast to one another, and if you do that, it lessens the impact of that scene. For instance, you include a comedic moment in a drama-filled scene (like what happened with mama Garde earlier blowing Prim's cover, then Gallade drops a humorous "BYE MUM" once Gothitelle leaves), then it makes the reader not take the scene seriously when you were actually trying to be so. And then vice-versa with these latest pages: the author built up so much about that dead trainer plot point, but then we shift over to this goofy harem thing while Gallade wants NONE of it. The humorous attempts here feel out of place when we're trying to resolve that bag of worms at long last, making me personally wish the others would stop dropping meme-worthy expressions long enough; as a result, I can't find these recent pages funny at all because of that unresolved drama.

    It's this inconsistency that's been bugging me about the comic as of late, and I was hoping others would've taken note of it too.

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  • Honestly love reading this. Get me to laugh. Gets me going. Looks nice. Even though the story is an absolute clusterfuck its charming. Well done Ploxy.

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  • I'm sure somebody will get offended with this, but this story's plot has retard strength. what it lacks in intelligence it makes up for it with raw power.

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  • "This predicament is getting so complicated" Gallade just described this entire comic in one panel. XD

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  • karlington said:
    I'm surprised it's remained confusing and entertaining for 93 pages.

    the plot is strong in this one.

    Dö you mean plot or "plot" cuz only One fits here and its not the first.

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  • Strykaah said:
    foursome?

    NO!!!

    I waited for 93 pages (& 2 whole damn years -2 weeks) to get to the Lesbian Action, I want to savor this moment for 10 pages atleast before the next "plot twist"
    (Hint Geodude Orgy)

    We don´t need to rush past the climax, Let´s slow down a bit & Enjoy our self's for a bit first.

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  • Fuck yes, I knew it. The moment I saw Goth enter the picture, it is bound to lead to some Lesbian scenes.

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  • sorenxoras said:
    I'm sure somebody will get offended with this, but this story's plot has retard strength. what it lacks in intelligence it makes up for it with raw power.

    It's the faces

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